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Steal the Sky With Your Songs

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The Temerment of Temperancei unfolded all the paper planes  that you made for me  trying see what made them fly  because i didn't want to be  
alone on the ground anymore  i pulled the heads off all your dolls  and rummaged around inside  trying to find the hearts  
that made them beat  
their little drums  in time The Temerment of Temperance
by ~twoplustwoisfish
Steal the Sky With Your Songs
by ~twoplustwoisfish
At the End of the Worldit feels too long  until forever  when the world finally ends  and we walk hand in hand  away from this whole mess   
we know that  gods and angels don't exist  but when everything's so strange  we can't resist  
calling  
into the rift  please lift me up   
in ice or flames  a poet said  can you decide  whether it's better  dying together or living apart?   
gods and angels don't exist  but when you're all alone  you can't resist  calling calling  into the rift  please lift me up   
lift me up to the stars &n At the End of the World
by ~twoplustwoisfish
1000 Pink ElephantsThere's just another party  
down the street tonight   
For the circus that came to town  All the carnival freaks  
and acrobats  And the body of one broken clown   
They buried me down  on a Sunday morn  beneath the dirt and the worms  Didn't even stop the show  Just kept the music playing   
Now they're dancing on my grave  with a hundred man parade  
and a thousand pink elephants   
And the clowns come in behind  with their painted on tears  but they don't dare to look  at themselves in the mirrors  That line all the headstones her 1000 Pink Elephants
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Sat Oct 10, 2009, 6:39 PM
recently it seems
all the words i'd like to say
dont belong to me

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    ~IronLantern Sep 7, 2009, 2:45:14 AM
    Hey, it's Fin!

    *glomp*

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    When all seems lost in the War of Light,
    Look to the stars--
    For hope burns bright!l
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    ~twoplustwoisfish Sep 7, 2009, 4:59:41 PM
    indeed it is!

    *tackle-glomp*

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    ~Lost in time lost in space and meaning~
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    ~IronLantern Sep 8, 2009, 1:08:14 AM
    *is glomped* n_n

    Awesome work you've got there, Fin

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    When all seems lost in the War of Light,
    Look to the stars--
    For hope burns bright!l
    :icontwoplustwoisfish:
    Mood: Love ~twoplustwoisfish Sep 8, 2009, 7:57:56 PM
    *blush* thank yous :)

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    ~Lost in time lost in space and meaning~
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    =AlecBell Aug 21, 2009, 8:04:39 AM
    Hello,

    Thank you very much for the :+fav: on Bacon's "Three Figures"
    [link]

    I'm pleased you liked it :heart:

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    There's always a better poem just out of reach.

    Words create situations [link]

    The roots of the future run deep [link]
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    ~random-kumquats Jun 8, 2009, 12:56:59 PM
    thanks for the :+fav: :D

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    avatar from [link]
    [link] for poetry, prose, and photography.
    don't blame me for trying to advertise the cheap way :)
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    ~twoplustwoisfish Jun 8, 2009, 1:21:27 PM
    np

    thanks to you as well on the collection

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    ~Lost in time lost in space and meaning~
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    ~random-kumquats Jun 10, 2009, 4:10:24 PM
    np. love your dev name and avatar.

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    avatar from [link]
    [link] for poetry, prose, and photography.
    don't blame me for trying to advertise the cheap way :)
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    ~twoplustwoisfish Jun 11, 2009, 11:19:27 AM
    heh thanks

    glad you liked "Angel With a.."
    although thats another one with a really awkward transition
    i hate how the style of the first stanza doesnt really fit with the rest =/

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    ~Lost in time lost in space and meaning~
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    ~random-kumquats Jun 11, 2009, 4:16:59 PM
    actually, the transition into rhyme was smoother. but that first stanza could be an easy fix. just sit down, stare at it, and try to improve. do that a few times and you should come out with something better than what you started with. that's usually what i do before i post aything

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    avatar from [link]
    [link] for poetry, prose, and photography.
    don't blame me for trying to advertise the cheap way :)
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